why the age change?
not complaining but i tought u wanted her to be a bit older than 110
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March 1912 to April 2019 is 107 years. I figured it did not make sense to have the update notice up from 2019 till 2026 (when she would be 114 years old). In other words, this file is implied to be accessed shortly after April 26 2019, and is consistent with the notice of archrival's message.
bro i broke something on my sandbox, can you edit it? idk what did i do
Edit: i solved it somehow.
i changed mine for what tarb suggested, the keratine thing, can u check it out a second.
i know you're mad at me but isn't this supposed to be a cowrite? (ಥ﹏ಥ)
I've already expressed what I thought of your entire draft and it's pretty much the same. I checked changes made today from our last conversation and only the hair part is elaborated on more, but it still makes no sense for the authority to design body manipulation tests based on this ability. It makes them looks stupid and without any scientific interest and more like going out of their way to torment a CSD for fun (which is for us but not accurate to the Authority's conduct nor goals).
Right now I tinkered a few final touches with mine before I get to work on a final. I gave myself a single day for a whole course's deliverables and I'm not sure I'll pass it, but here goes.
i'm planning to write some therapy session logs, maybe if i ger how u did the block of the diary or if i find another format, but out of that, i hope u pass all ur finals, u need a break with no school stress. ❊(´︶`)❊
Also, try comparing revisions 254 and 212 on the history collapsible below. Just activate the left dot next to 212 and press compare versions to see.
It should address some of your concerns on her appearing to be a crybaby
- Make more plot events explicit and expanded upon (history, relationship with bro, emotional response to killing a man, and Columbian corruption)
- Incorporate historical/social context in the journal
- Flesh out the characterization of Aura, Miguel, and Bellard (in the journal and the last interview).
- A grievance request submitted by Dr. Mateo, written by Aura. It is swiftly denied.
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