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Primary Facilities

To logistically support the operational necessity and basis for personnel Unclear. What about the "operational necessity" and "basis for personnel" (basis? not the right way to phrase that) is so important that it merits the very first sentence? within the Authority, the Authority operates and maintains facilities and installations worldwide to effortlessly assist The whole point of this site as that this is NOT easy. Perhaps these facilities make it possible, or even make it easier, but NEVER "effortless". Effortless implies no drama, no danger, no point to the site. It's a very important word choice mistake to make. in the containment and research of RPCs. These facilities may vary in terms of manpower, responsibilities, and capabilities where they employ anywhere between a few to thousands of staff and personnel.

Suggestion:

To support and sustain the logistical necessities of Authority personnel & operations is a crucial and often overlooked task.To this end, the Authority constructs and maintains a worldwide network of facilities and infrastructure to contain and research RPCs. Varying heavily in manpower, responsibilities, and secrecy, they take many forms and employ anywhere from tens to thousands of staff.

Site

The Authority maintains and operates facilities known as Sites, these facilities are Unnecessary. Breaks up flow. Add a comma to the end of the next sentence instead. the primary operational basis for the research and containment of RPCs. Generally, Site facilities may have Generally + have, double uncertainty there. Choose one - and use more specific language, features/contain instead of "have" various integrated sectors that may include Alpha, Beta and Gamma RPCs.

Site Directors, in turn, unnecessary, cut it out. report directly to the Regional Overseer.

Area

However, Unnecessary, cut it out. Clarity and brevity is crucial.contrary to Site facilities, Area facilities are designated to specific types of operational facilities and do not contain any RPCs. Area facilities operates various facilities, such as Observational, Research, Garrisoned MST, Training, and many more. See Facility Operations for more information.

Area Directors, in turn, report directly to the Regional Overseer.

Regional

Regional facilities Are regional facilities their own separate kind of facility? A bit unclear; my suggestion, they are specially designated Areas OR Sites that are responsible for the central management and administrative oversight of Areas and Sites within their respective jurisdiction. Each Regional facility is responsible for the coordination of coordinates large scale operations, approving Site creations, and appointing Area and Site Directors. Active tone, not passive tone. A lot of passive tone in this draft. Due to the logistical importance that require the continuation of operational management their crucial role in the operations and logistics of subordinate Sites and Areas, security within these facilities are heightened and RPCs are strictly forbidden from From a what? From being brought within, you mean, it has to be said. a Regional facility within an eighty mile radius.

Regional Directors, in turn, directly report to Continental Directors.

Continental

Continental Commands, or Central Commands, are highly important to the Authority's operational duties to function as an organization. Indicitive of a lot of the problems with this. "Highly important to the Authority's operation duties to function as an organization." is extremely redundant, and tells you nothing more than "Are essential to overall Authority operations" However, Every use of "however" has been redundant, breaking up the flow of the writing. these command centers are not much known Awkward phrasing. Further details on these Commands are withheld for the sake of operational and procedural security. due to their operational management and sensitive nature. What is currently speculated is that there are currently seven command centers operating within each continent across the Why would an official Authority document "speculate" on its own structure? Commands aren't THAT classified. Additionally, the "speculation" merely just listing off all the continents is lazy. globe, which are the following, Northern America, Southern America, Europe, Africa, Asia, Oceania, and Antarctica. Perhaps mention the idea that Antarctica Command (ANTARCOM? POLARCOM?) is responsible for trans-dimensional and space forces?

Missed opportunity to include the TERMINOLOGY that is so important to these site lore articles. Could say something like:

Authority Commands do not always follow the traditional geographical boundaries of the continents. For example, AFRICOM - INCOMPLETE

Continental Directors, in turn, directly report to the Board of Global Directors.

Secondary Facilities

On-Location Site

On-Location Sites, or OL-Sites, are often referred as secondary facilities as these types are established to specifically contain anomalies that cannot be transferred to a primary Site facility. While generally containing specific RPCs, OL-Sites may contain minimal departments such as security or research of that anomaly.

Oversight of these secondary facilities are relatively done by its closest primary facility, but rarely may be done so by a Regional facility.

OL-Site Directors, in turn, report directly to their assigned primary facility or Regional facility.

Facility Operations

Primarily, Area facilities operate various of specialized roles within their facilities and practically provide logistical and operations support to nearby Site facilities.

Administrative (Admin)

Administrative facilities, unlike Regional facilities, are secondary administrative installations that are responsible for the internal security, ethical regulations, human resources management, and many more, for Site facilities within its designated jurisdiction. Most of the management support for Site facilities are primarily done by Administrative facilities, but are rarely conducted by Regional facilities due to other important matters.

Biological (Bio)

Biological facilities are responsible for the research and management of viral, bacterial, and fungi related diseases along with other inconsistent biohazardous materials. These facilities are clinically-isolated to prevent any biological samples from being contaminated and released outside of the facility. Accessing these facilities will require a hazardous material suit (HAZMAT).

Extra-Dimensional (ExDim)

Extra-Dimensional facilities are responsible for the research and management of phenomenons exhibiting extradimensional properties and affecting physics in an inconsistent behavior.

Garrisoned Operations Base (Garrison)

Garrisoned Operations Base, or Garrison facilities, are facilities the barracks and garrisons the Authority's security forces that ranges in different installations and stations such as Naval Base Installation, Airbase Installation, et cetra. These Garrison facilities also operate as proving grounds, and are mostly occupied by Authority Security Forces and Mobile Strike Teams.

Humanoid (Hum)

Humanoid facilities, unlike Biological facilities, are primarily responsible for the research of cryptozoological related entities. Most of the research are on entities that are sapient and sentient, and are studied for their biological behavior and historical related studies.

Observation and Data (O&D)

Observation and Data facilities operate covertly across the globe and are typically responsible for maintaining internal data security, facility communications across the globe, and monitoring worldwide communications for RPCs and GOIs.

Records and Archive (R&A)

Records and Archive facilities are responsible for the storage and archiving of the Authority's operational data and information, along with maintaining records and evidence of previous investigations regarding RPCs and GOIs.

Research and Development (R&D)

Research and Development facilities are the primary facilities that maintain the research and development of technological advanced equipment for containment and Authority personnel.

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